I'm a teacher. I teach 8 year old children. This story is not that bad actually. It has a nice beginning, middle and end. The story sets up the "problem" and there is an attempt at a solution. Sure, the spelling and grammar aren't great, but that is only part of picture. It doesn't seem to detract from the meaning or intent of the story. Besides, the animation set to the story is awesome!!! I give it a C+.

HA - HA!

it is worser than shiiiiit!

only a retarded person could enjoy this. least intelligent thing i've ever seen. sorry i watched.

I don't care what anyone says, that was awesome.